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AWESOME

You know about the my little pony video with ur song right?! SO GOOD!

Andres360 responds:

what video ?!

Pretty good

A bit long but i like that. The piece really keeps going and never gets boring. The drums are pretty sick! The only thing is i kind of wanted a little bit of a faster piano part but if you were going for something slow thats cool too. Return plz ;)

Azoic responds:

Thanks, bro. Never really considered putting anything faster into the tune. I've not made a DnB track for some time!

Gimmie a second I'll go check out your latest tracks! :)

Awesome!

The intro was really good! And i enjoyed the whole song :) good writing

ABRYZ responds:

hey thanks man check out other jams too and rate!!!

Nice job

I enjoyed it a lot and it was interesting throughout good job :)

AngelofPeace responds:

Glad to hear you enjoyed it :D

Nice

Pretty epic i enjoyed it and it wasnt crazy long like my song XD good job

FaeryTaleAdventurer responds:

Believe it or not, I actually DO have a knack for lengthy tunes to listen to while I work, drive, or whatever.

After awhile even your longest tunes will have transitions so smooth, the listener would be immersed enough into the music to not even noticed that it LOOPED!

-FTA

Very Good Techno!

I am usually kind of critical bu tthis was very nice! Definitly a good dance song! Keep up the good work!

TechnoRepublic responds:

Thank you for the great comments, i will do my best to keep bringing ou the best!

Good

I liked it man. Not as bad as i thought it would be from the way you descrtibed it. Give yourself some credit. Lots of things going on and overall a fun song to listen to. comment back plz

Twistedtechnology responds:

glad you enjoyed it :)

Begging

This song is honestly begging for a melody. In just needs something more. Put in a prominent melody and this song is pretty good!

HonorOfStyle responds:

Alright. I'll try and keep that in mind for my future work. Lol But I just cant help but say "ouch" with that 7 you gave me. Still it could have been worse and I actually very thankful your honest. It's a whole lot more helpful to me than some comment with a score of 10 and the only thing they say is somthing like "awsome" or "cool". ANY WAYS THANKS FOR RESPONDING. I LOVE HEARING FEEDBACK!
Oh and if you'd like me to msg you every time I submit audio, just PM me about it. I'd be happy to let you know of any future work! :D

Summary

Not my type of music really so ill keep the review short :) The "bass" part i guess is way to loud. it sounds like interesting thing are or should be happening but that part just feels to loud. The bass part is also kinda...really weird with rhythms at times. Even if you were going for something different, really really weird stuff is not the way to go (0:45). But i actually enjoyed the song for it not being something i normally like. Good job.

Glomple responds:

Thanks for the review! I need to master stuff better but it's quite difficult with the Lite version of Ableton I have. :/

I couldn't come up with a better transition for 0:45--I suppose I should have spent more time on it.

Thanks again! I'll definitely use your constructive criticism and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Seemed very familiar.

It was probably the instrumentation or the chord progression, but i felt like ive heard it before. Good job on the trance parts tho. Made me want to...trance? Could have used some more melody maybe and some more interesting additions. It seemed repetitive. Part at 1:53 felt dissonant i think from teh instrumentation i dont know if that was purposeful. It didnt fit right with me. Nice tho... I liked it a lot everythings there except like a prminent melody.

LampShade15 responds:

It was indeed intentional. And it does sound familiar at the beginning is the most overused bassline.

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