thebigtarget1's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[(HoS) Black Water]

Begging

This song is honestly begging for a melody. In just needs something more. Put in a prominent melody and this song is pretty good!

HonorOfStyle responds:

Alright. I'll try and keep that in mind for my future work. Lol But I just cant help but say "ouch" with that 7 you gave me. Still it could have been worse and I actually very thankful your honest. It's a whole lot more helpful to me than some comment with a score of 10 and the only thing they say is somthing like "awsome" or "cool". ANY WAYS THANKS FOR RESPONDING. I LOVE HEARING FEEDBACK!
Oh and if you'd like me to msg you every time I submit audio, just PM me about it. I'd be happy to let you know of any future work! :D

[Asphyxiated by Wobble]

Summary

Not my type of music really so ill keep the review short :) The "bass" part i guess is way to loud. it sounds like interesting thing are or should be happening but that part just feels to loud. The bass part is also kinda...really weird with rhythms at times. Even if you were going for something different, really really weird stuff is not the way to go (0:45). But i actually enjoyed the song for it not being something i normally like. Good job.

Glomple responds:

Thanks for the review! I need to master stuff better but it's quite difficult with the Lite version of Ableton I have. :/

I couldn't come up with a better transition for 0:45--I suppose I should have spent more time on it.

Thanks again! I'll definitely use your constructive criticism and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[{80SR}Run]

Seemed very familiar.

It was probably the instrumentation or the chord progression, but i felt like ive heard it before. Good job on the trance parts tho. Made me want to...trance? Could have used some more melody maybe and some more interesting additions. It seemed repetitive. Part at 1:53 felt dissonant i think from teh instrumentation i dont know if that was purposeful. It didnt fit right with me. Nice tho... I liked it a lot everythings there except like a prminent melody.

LampShade15 responds:

It was indeed intentional. And it does sound familiar at the beginning is the most overused bassline.

[lolalex]

Weird

Probably the weirdest chord progression ever lol. Kind of boring and predictable like that guy said. And wow i just heard the loop...its bad lol. It needs to be longer or transfer into the loop better. The stop kind of felt forced as well. needs some work.

DJ-Athens responds:

its not serious xD

[Hallowfest 2010]

Hey that wasnt half bad!

I enjoyed the song. I was able to listen to it without being overwhelmed but it was also something that could be danced to! very good job man.

Twistedtechnology responds:

im glad you like it! As soon as I get the chance, i will return the favor with a review for you. hopefully tomorrow. The only thing i think i need to do to this is re-adjust the bass level on this track. Because when i play it in my car, my subs want to blow my windows out when the bass is turned almost all the way down. (an aftermarket stereo might help a little, but who knows lol) Again, i will get back to you asap, and I greatly appreciate the review!! Its nice to see NG still has people who aren't 0bombers :-)

~Twistedtechnology

[Vulture]

wow

For your first thats really nice man! I definitly like it. good job, and thanks for the comment!

vanderweisman responds:

Thanks, its my technically my first as this is the first one I have ever finished. I have other things, but they were crap so I ditched them... And no problem, it was a good techno

[Godot's Theme]

Nice

Even though it was a virtual sax (maybe) it was still nice. Due to that i think it made it a little square, but maybe thats how the song is supposed to go. It was nice tho like reallly good and catchy! ill give you a 5! BTW i came here from the audio advertisements page. Please visit one of my songs as well!

seel responds:

Thanks, not sure what you mean by square, but yeah it would be really nice if I could get the sax sounding a bit more realistic. I'll make sure to check out your songs.

[Pandora's Casket]

Weird

It was nice, kind of weird chords at some points. Im sure you were trying to achieve that effect though. It was pretty goo tho! Ill rate you 5! I came here from audio advertisements in forums by the way. Please listen to something of mine too.

[Drunk and alone....again]

Nice

Its ok, but from musician to musician, it just gets really repetitive. Change up the rhythms a little bit and maybe change the chords around too. If you are looping things, bring them down dynamically after a while and add in new interesting things, usually faster and different, so that it is not to repetitive. Otherwise it was ok, so i will give you a 4/5

fidgetfreak responds:

i agree, but it was made on a demo. so this was just kinda somethin i threw together; if i could i would.

[Guardian Angels]

Nice :)

Relaxing but epic at the same time. It reminds me of movies where an army is preparing for an epic battle. And i certainly like the winds :) Some points seemed a little slow but it all built toward the end. A key change would have been epic at around 2:40 at the ewnd of that loud part just have an even louder part witha key change. But hey its your song do what you want! Good job 5/5 man